Talk:Communication with public stakeholders on the femern link project in Germany
Feedback on Abstract:
|Text clarity||The text sounds comprehensible|
|Language||OK with minor misspellings|
|Description of the tool/theory/concept||Is there but is not clear for the reader.|
|Purpose explanation||Is there but not clear for the reader, try to explain the intention of the article|
|Title of the Wiki||The title describes a situation|
The title of the article describes a situation that is explained in the lines below, it describes dialog forums as a debate on a partnership basis, can dialog forum be considered a tool/concept?, if yes the title of the article should be reconsidered.
The abstract probably is too descriptive with the communication issues experienced in German projects that it deviates to describes a concrete tool/concept and fails to provide a clear explanation of the purpose.