Talk:Communication with public stakeholders on the femern link project in Germany

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Feedback on Abstract:

Text clarity The text sounds comprehensible
Language OK with minor misspellings
Description of the tool/theory/concept Is there but is not clear for the reader.
Purpose explanation Is there but not clear for the reader, try to explain the intention of the article
Title of the Wiki The title describes a situation


The title of the article describes a situation that is explained in the lines below, it describes dialog forums as a debate on a partnership basis, can dialog forum be considered a tool/concept?, if yes the title of the article should be reconsidered.

The abstract probably is too descriptive with the communication issues experienced in German projects that it deviates to describes a concrete tool/concept and fails to provide a clear explanation of the purpose.

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