Talk:HAZOP method, deviation analysis
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|Text clarity||The text is not clear for the reader|
|Language||OK with minor grammar errors that affects the clarity of the text|
|Description of the tool/theory/concept||The method has not been clearly described|
|Purpose explanation||Is not clear for the reader, try to explain the intention of the article|
|Title of the Wiki||OK|
The abstract is not well written making its reading difficult.
The abstract mentioned that Nowadays many companies use this device to enhance their project management, are the article will describe a device or a method?, if it is a device explain the method behind the device.