Talk:Muda, Mura and Muri
Feedback on Abstract:
|Text clarity||The text sounds comprehensible and it builds on references|
|Description of the tool/theory/concept||OK, no mention to which aspect of Portfolio, Program, Project management can be applied|
|Purpose explanation||Is there but clear for the reader|
|Title of the Wiki||OK|
The abstract describe three concepts but fails to describe to which aspect of Portfolio, Program, Project management can be applied.
The abstract also should consider to provide a better formulation of the purpose intended with the article.