Talk:Business Analytics in Civil Engineering Projects
Text Clarity; Ok.
Language; Ok, minor grammar mistakes.
References; missing references related to the standards.
In general the abstract is ok, when developing the article don't forget to relate with an specific aspect of Project Management Standards, in your case is related with Project controls, try to find sources related with this aspect.
Is also good that you already established the structure of the article, however I can see that the headings are more related with BIM/VDC aspects.
I recommend you to investigate how currently project controls are managed in a digital environment (BIM/VDC environments).
Initially you don't need to elaborate upon any case, you don't need sections 5 and 6 of your article, however if you have insight information about this case I would recommend you to use it and see how the project dealt with project controls aspects.