Talk:Create a pitch

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Revision as of 21:37, 25 February 2019


Feedback on Abstract:

Text clarity Good
Language Good
Description of the tool/theory/concept Good
Purpose explanation Not clear how it is related to project, program and/or portfolio management
Title of the Wiki Good
Relevance to curriculum The topic has to be related to project, program or portfolio management and it is not.
References Remember to make correct references. Here are some guidelines from DTU Library:

Feedback on Abstract:

Cannot give feedback as the abstract is incomplete (19-Feb-2019).

Feedback 1 | Reviewer name: Sarantis Pavlidis

Question 1 · TEXT

Quality of the summary:

Does the summary make the key focus, insights and/or contribution of the article clear?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 1

'My personal opininion is that the scope / aim of the article is well-defined and explained. It passes a personal view on the theme and I think that it is clear enough what is about. The current article is also well organized.

Question 2 · TEXT

Structure and logic of the article:

Is the argument clear?

Is there a logical flow to the article?

Does one part build upon the other?

Is the article consistent in its argument and free of contradictions?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 2

I think that the article is coherent and comprehensive. I would explain more the model entrepreneur selling a product to an investor. I also like a lot the part of the pitch structure.

Question 3 · TEXT

Grammar and style:

Is the writing free of grammatical and spelling errors?

Is the language precise without unnecessary fill words?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 3

I think that there is nothing to suggest because as I mentioned before, the article is well-written.

Question 4 · TEXT

Figures and tables:

Are figures and tables clear?

Do they summarize the key points of the article in a meaningful way?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 4

There are no tables nor figures.

Question 5 · TEXT

Interest and relevance:

Is the article of high practical and / or academic relevance?

Is it made clear in the article why / how it is relevant?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 5

Answer here

Question 6 · TEXT

Depth of treatment:

Is the article interesting for a practitioner or academic to read?

Does it make a significant contribution beyond a cursory web search?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 6

Answer here

Question 7 · TEXT

Annotated bibliography:

Does the article properly cite and acknowledge previous work?

Does it briefly summarize the key references at the end of the article?

Is it based on empirical data instead of opinion?

What would you suggest to improve?

Answer 7

Answer here

Feedback 2 | Reviewer name: Sai Nadukuru

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