Talk:HAZOP method, deviation analysis

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Text clarity The text is not clear for the reader
Language OK with minor grammar errors that affects the clarity of the text
Description of the tool/theory/concept The method has not been described clearly
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The abstract is not well written making its reading difficult.

The abstract mentioned that Nowadays many companies use this device to enhance their project management, are the article will describe a device or a method?, if it is a device explain the method behind the device.

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