Talk:Requirements management using SysML

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Feedback on Abstract:

The abstract seems incomplete. However, please find my immediate feedback below (19-Feb-2019)

Text clarity & language The text is okay, however there's a lack of flow/consistency (too many dotted lines).
Description of the tool/theory/concept Good.
Article purpose explanation Good. Ensure to emphasize how the tool is relevant and its project/program/portfolio management without getting into too much technical detail about the modelling language itself.
Relevance to curriculum Relevant
References Good references.
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