|−|The Abstract is too generic, the article mentions larger duration for this type of projects, try to elaborate more in this aspect or find a relevant aspect common in Renewable Energy Projects. |+|
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|−|What is the relevance of this topic for Project Managers? |+|
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|−|Missing references, please review the Mandatory References in the listed Reading material of the course. |+|
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Revision as of 01:31, 8 February 2018
Text Clarity; in general Ok, there are some paragraphs not clear enough.
Language; minor grammar issues.
References; missing references related to the standards, you have only one reference and in the text you mentioned PBOK, I believe you meant PMBOK.
The Abstract is still too generic, the article, so far, does not shows me why should risk management in Energy projects differs from other types of projects, what is the difference?, try to elaborate more this aspect(s).
What is the relevance of this topic for Project Managers?, still not clear in the article.